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The translation quality is good. I haven't seen any grammar or spelling mistakes. As for the story, so far, it is very slow. There is not much action happening. The main character does not really seek out her stepson, and she meets her husband face-to-face around chapter 30-ish. So, if you are expecting fluffy and sweet moments early, then you might find yourself disappointed. In addition, the main character's personal goals or actions don't happen fast as well. She plans to establish a shop to get her own source of income separate from her rich husband; it is introduced near the very beginning, yet 40 chapters in, it's still not open and she hasn't done anything with it. To put it in a more nicer way, most of the story so far focuses on fleshing out the characters--meaning introspection and internal monologue and exposition, but they don't really take any action. I don't think the romance aspect is going to come very soon. I do enjoy how the story does establish the goals or desires of the main character and the stepson (seeing how the father is only introduced much later, he doesn't have enough time to flesh out his character). The main character's goal is to earn money so that if anything bad happens to her, she won't be hurt. The stepson seems in want for parental affection, especially from his father. One thing I don't understand is why the main character isn't more sympathetic to the stepson. Even if she's not treating him bad, as a person who has been in a similar situation (of having divorced parents and gaining step-parents), you would think she'd be more empathetic with him instead of ignoring/avoiding him. I do think the story uses dramatic irony well. People misinterpreting the main character's actions to mean she's a very kind person especially towards her stepson did get a chuckle out of me.

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I Became the Male Lead's Stepmother After Transmigrating

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