If you've been reading fantasy c-light novels for some this one might be familiar, in that everyone around the MC, for absolutely no reason, is an asshole. These characters will look down on the MC, mock him, and ostracize him (coupled with snide remarks by anonymous people in the crowd), only so minutes later the MC can show his prowess to shock and awe everyone, as they wallow in their regrets in very exaggerated manners, and the MC's ego is stroked. This happening once in awhile is okay, but this setup is constant in the story in that it happens almost every time the MC interacts with others. Rinse and repeat. I like pets, I like systems, and I like zero to hero stories, but the writing in this one is way too amateur.
Juju Lost in the Fog
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