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raptorfalcon
raptorfalconLv52yrraptorfalcon

This is actually a good premise, but the execution is just horrible. Either the translator skipped paragraphs, or the author doesn't feel the need to explain or plan anything properly. Examples: -MC transfers 1-3 days of cultivation every day, despite receiving multiple days of cultivation each time. We could say he cannot transfer the cultivation given by the system, but that means he can only transfer 1 day since technically he gave away the previous day's cultivation. - Pick a hard technique because the longer it takes to cultivate the better. Huh? Why? - Since he only gives the pet 1-3 days of cultivation at a time, it should be impossible for his pet to keep up with him, since he gets much more in return. Yet, their levels are synced. - MC reaches bottleneck and needs combat to breakthrough. How much combat? 1 fight... All interactions in the school are just 1 badly done cliché after another. So monotonous and uninspiring that you might as well just skip it. I wish another author copied this theme and did a good job with it.

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Imparting My Cultivation To Beasts Gets Me 10,000X In Return!

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Shadow_Fortnite
Shadow_FortniteLv14Shadow_Fortnite

THX

TigerBlooImmortal:on babel novel you can find one called something bug lord or something like that, just type bug lord in the search and you can probably find it
TigerBlooImmortal
TigerBlooImmortalLv15TigerBlooImmortal

don't worry this book itself is probably the copy, at this point we never know

Jocom
JocomLv12Jocom

I'd totally be willing to copy it and write that for you as it does sound like an interesting premise and I'm quite the bored weirdo but I'm already struggling to write anything with my own novels I really need to get a life... of any kind... no real motivation to do anything at all. *Yawn*

Alkatraz999
Alkatraz999Lv1Alkatraz999

Try practicing charity. It will fill that whole within u of only taking in things and not giving out. What goes around comes around.

Jocom:I'd totally be willing to copy it and write that for you as it does sound like an interesting premise and I'm quite the bored weirdo but I'm already struggling to write anything with my own novels I really need to get a life... of any kind... no real motivation to do anything at all. *Yawn*
Jocom
JocomLv12Jocom

No clue what that means mate.

Alkatraz999:Try practicing charity. It will fill that whole within u of only taking in things and not giving out. What goes around comes around.
Shadow_Fortnite
Shadow_FortniteLv14Shadow_Fortnite

Hey i got a question, do you know anout a novel where he uses his pets as assassins

TigerBlooImmortal:don't worry this book itself is probably the copy, at this point we never know
TigerBlooImmortal
TigerBlooImmortalLv15TigerBlooImmortal

not really. there are a couple where it is mentioned but then totally disregarded in a couple chapters, most will just follow the usual cliche after like a good 30-50 chapters

Shadow_Fortnite:Hey i got a question, do you know anout a novel where he uses his pets as assassins
Shadow_Fortnite
Shadow_FortniteLv14Shadow_Fortnite

Tell me them

TigerBlooImmortal:not really. there are a couple where it is mentioned but then totally disregarded in a couple chapters, most will just follow the usual cliche after like a good 30-50 chapters
TigerBlooImmortal
TigerBlooImmortalLv15TigerBlooImmortal

on babel novel you can find one called something bug lord or something like that, just type bug lord in the search and you can probably find it

Shadow_Fortnite:Tell me them
TigerBlooImmortal
TigerBlooImmortalLv15TigerBlooImmortal

it's called ruling the heavens with divine bugs

Shadow_Fortnite:THX
Eccouga
EccougaLv3Eccouga

Welcome to Chinese Webnovel ...Only thing you will find here are arrogant young master , countless faceslaping, lots sexy female character who will fall in love with MC for no reason ..GOOD LUCK

YulongYuXianTaiyin
YulongYuXianTaiyinLv6YulongYuXianTaiyin

If anyone does know or find another [better] novel with 'imparting cultivation' as theme, please do tell

MoshuiDaoist
MoshuiDaoistLv13MoshuiDaoist

So many skips. Its horrible