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2021-11-13 07:01

Okay so I like this book, and I like the premise of dying and reincarnation into a different world.... the emotions portrayed in the first chapter are really good...and make you feel for the MC... for the next chapters I found that it drags on quite a lot.... The plot needs to happen.... I'm sure there's still more the author has planned but please if you can speed up the progression between chapter 2 and 4... Overall this book has potential and I look forward to what the author can do with it 😃😃😃

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Yes, There is. But I won't spoil it here hehe. Thank you for the insightful comment. Will sure to work in it soon.

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