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Player0Kun
Player0KunLv42yr
2022-06-25 12:55

Story is good. Abilities he wished for are also good. But, my main problem is that mc is taking all of this as way to light. I mean he told Thor all about himself just because he was his favorite character, dude for you fiction has just became real and you are giving away info about yourself to people you just meet for the first time in life. I don't like how mc thinks of world he lives in as comic.

My New Marvel Life

RJTStories
3.5
38 Chs

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RJTStories
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You have a point I did make some slifht changes to their conversation. but it's not like he gave away everything he basically made the cosmic storm, as the way he got his powers and didn't even explain he could copy powers which is what he wpuldve said to SHIELD because they will feel better if they think they know everything about you. Fury especially thinks he has everything under his control

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it's nice, although you know the conversation is a little awkward and all ,but the idea of the tech and wishes is quite interesting , it's just if only there's more chapters .

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marquise816
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The paragraphs are too large and blocky especially in the first few chapters. Other than the spacing everything else was ok, enough to pass the time.

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NeaCambelt
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Le mc veut renaître à 18 ans et aller à midtown high mais c 16 ans midtown sale débile et c encore plus débile de commencer à 19 ans et pas comm nourrisson avec le net il peut ce préparer au menace futur facile et il a du temps C un fic marvel pourri je déconseille à quiconque

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Mia_amalie
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очень классное произведение очень надеюсь продолжения не слушайте тех кто спамит плохие отзывы 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Orzechos
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The story is inconsistent. At the age of 25 he suddenly ends up in high school then starts a company and makes millions. If you really like the Marvel world, this story may be for you. If you are looking for something that makes sense, skip!

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