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2022-04-14 14:54

It's been a while since am writing one but let's see how it goes.... I am most definitely a big fan of author sama's works, loved her works since a long time, this novel in present is definitely one of my favorite as it's just perfect even with just few chapters one can definitely confidently review it cuz it has the feeling that it will be even more awesome in future chapters The world background is great, MC and ML first interaction was unique for sure, but what I love most is the familial relationships b/w the characters above all, it's wonderfully present, MC's fathers murder mystery and everything else tho I really wish he's still alive somehow and just in hiding cuz ahhhh the Goddess Mother definitely deserves some time with her soulmate!!!!!! It's just perfect, everything is on the line and for those who don't like extra fluffiness they r definitely welcome as it's just so right. The plot above all is definitely something to look forward to, will definitely review again after more chapters cuz it definitely needs way more, clearly a hidden gem on making Update stability is well author sama has already said how it will be but hope in future it's way more consistent cuz it's just that addictive, the writing is so so awesome. And every character introduced till now will definitely leave some impression, they r all awesome above all!

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Thank you so much. As soon as I finalize Voyage with the Pirate king, this would become my daily project. I will continue to work hard. 😁

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