The story is good and well written besides being from eleceed that so far i have not seen a good eleceed story which continues to be updated

I'm just giving this the review because this is an eleceed fanfiction I hope this story will be updated soon as so far I haven't found a good eleceed story

You have a way with words that make each read worth admiring, you've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer. A novel with great potential

Has a very good intro isnt rushed and is good so far with one chapter EXP

A well written plot with a lot of potential. I was so shocked by the 1st chapter too, but don't judge this book based on that , its really a wounderful work worth the time you spend. good luck author.

So far the story is very good and very well written not to mention that it is the first good eleceed fanfiction that I see I hope the story continues to be updated

so far i'm loving the story i hope the author continues with his great work 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

don't fear author ,2 women not harem that's only polygamy even you go 4 women that's not harem just polygamy if follow law from our world let me explain how many women if harem small harem 5 to 7 wife harem 7 to 15 wife huge harem 15 to 30 wife massive harem 30 to ??? wife and lastly our world law how many wife we can marry that's call polygamy it's 4 wife max so that's all from me , because when I read synopsis I know how you feel maybe so people will come say only 1 wife right? but say to them I don't care , because what ? When in eleceed if he know how human body work he can copy other power from force control so what if he copy lighting power and access cell to nano ? he can make he cell become immortality and he immortality to so when you become immortality after life thousand of year ,you think common sense work for them even his daughter Become his harem if he life to long

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I finally found a fanfiction of eleceed the story is well written and interesting i hope the story stays that way Zmmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmmzzmzmzmzmmzzmmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmmzmzmzzmmzzmzmzmzmzzmzmzmzzmmzmzmzmzmzmzmzmmzmzmzmzmzmmzmzmzmzmzmz