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Matthew_Gooche
Matthew_GoocheLv123yr
2021-12-29 22:10

Overall bland. This more closely resembles some sort of cliche romance story, than a light novel. Needless anticipation all over the place, slow development. This novel is simply unsatisfying and unfulfilling. There you are waiting for some sort of catalyst of change, and 50 chapters later, he is no different. Worst of all, I don't know what I'm even supposed to expect. The writing is the only redeeming factor, because the standard is already garbage. I doubt most people will bother with this, there is nothing particularly enthralling, and the upload rate is also abysmal. The first chapter was probably the only good one, everything from then on, is weak. Worst of all, prefacing the novel with a warning that the protagonist would be cowardly and pathetic for the first 50 chapters is just plain moronic. Expecting people to wait 50 chapters for the protagonist to resemble anything decent is just presumptuous.

The Devil's Harem

bababkchod
4.3
204 Chs

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Preston_Playz_8167
Preston_Playz_8167Lv4

you can't expect the mc to change suddenly at chapter 50. THIS IS A SLOW PACED NOVEL! Atleast read UPTO the latest chapter and you'll see

3yr
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Tsetth
TsetthLv14

well, this didn't age well...

3yr
Nydre
NydreLv14

Nobody's about to pay just to see if a story they already don't like will get better, especially if it's a slow paced story.

Preston_Playz_8167:you can't expect the mc to change suddenly at chapter 50. THIS IS A SLOW PACED NOVEL! Atleast read UPTO the latest chapter and you'll see
2yr
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Preston_Playz_8167
Preston_Playz_8167Lv4

are you forced to pay?

Nydre:Nobody's about to pay just to see if a story they already don't like will get better, especially if it's a slow paced story.
2yr
Preston_Playz_8167
Preston_Playz_8167Lv4

are you forced to read?

Nydre:Nobody's about to pay just to see if a story they already don't like will get better, especially if it's a slow paced story.
2yr
Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

yep agreed my go to are the author which have ~100 chapters not looked as by that time if someone stays he/she would surely continue to read forward and one can fully understand what type of novel it is example i remember read apocalypse novel where there's no mention/hint of any apocalypse till the time you hit the paywall

Nydre:Nobody's about to pay just to see if a story they already don't like will get better, especially if it's a slow paced story.
2yr
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readtokilltime
readtokilltimeLv14

It was really not worth the read. It is basically My Wife is a Beautiful CEO, and a poor copy at that. This mc just has different circumstances, being he lost his memories and is a coward and extrenely naive. The story pacing is extremely slow and by the time the author wants you to pay for the chapters there is no improvement or actual plot involved in the story. He is at the same place as he is, same personailty, still not working at the job, no ‘girlfriends’ there’s just no improvement what so ever. I’d recommend you just go read My Wife is a Beautiful CEO or re-read if you’ve already finished it.

3yr

MUHACHE_JUMA
MUHACHE_JUMALv14

I really appreciate an author whose mastery of language is good. This book has a bit of everything. Language- check, imagination- Check, creativity- check A beautiful plot- check and finally an alluring narration. highly recommend it

3yr
The_Lonely_Guy
The_Lonely_GuyLv4

Shameless review from your one and only. The story was earlier published through inkstone, but then I had to upload it using Share story. Long story short, I am posting this story once again and I hope you guys will shower me with the same love as before. Thank you and enjoy the story.

3yr
Arc_Demon
Arc_DemonLv2

The progress is too slow.... Feels like it will take 300 chapters just for world devlipment. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr
Seixia
SeixiaLv15

So, I did try to give this story a try and it shows some promise. My main issue is how passive the MC is, this on top of the fact it has no tags makes me worry. To many good books have been ruined by massive MCs, I get wanting to build up the MC and show them grow into their role. However, with the personality of most of the females around him it makes me hesitant to continue reading. It is an interesting idea behind it and once it has tags or some sort of guarantee that The MC will change. I would be willing to come back and give it a second shot.

3yr
Sett_Kaisel
Sett_KaiselLv11

So basically, This is something one could get addicted to, this is a very enjoyable story that I started to love, everything about it is just 😩🙏. Oh and there is much to cover, so the story could go anywhere, love that too

3yr
_Frost_
_Frost_Lv13

You can tell the author put in effort and time with how the interactions between side characters, There not boring and they do build upon getting an idea on the depth of who each character is. This is one of the main points I've noticed with this novel so far that I think was done quite well. Now this isn't a problem but more of personal preference and that just has to do with me not liking the childish mentality of the main character. Never been of fan of it being used as a personality type used for adult main characters, but it is what it is who the characters are is the authors choice. Two important things I think the author can do to increase the popularity of his novel is increase the rate in which chapters are uploaded and include tags for the novel. Majority of the novels I read I've found through going through certain tags so having this novel not being able to be found under any of them probably isn't helping.

3yr
HoboSolo
HoboSoloLv15

I’m not really into these types of novels, and I’m not gonna read it, but on 12/5/2021, this man had a picture of JESSICA RABBIT as the cover! 5/5 just for that

3yr
Yours_Lovingly
Yours_LovinglyLv3

Proud to be Indian ☺️. Thanks for such a wonderful book.

2yr
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