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Matthew_Gooche
Matthew_GoocheLv123yr
2021-12-29 22:10

Overall bland. This more closely resembles some sort of cliche romance story, than a light novel. Needless anticipation all over the place, slow development. This novel is simply unsatisfying and unfulfilling. There you are waiting for some sort of catalyst of change, and 50 chapters later, he is no different. Worst of all, I don't know what I'm even supposed to expect. The writing is the only redeeming factor, because the standard is already garbage. I doubt most people will bother with this, there is nothing particularly enthralling, and the upload rate is also abysmal. The first chapter was probably the only good one, everything from then on, is weak. Worst of all, prefacing the novel with a warning that the protagonist would be cowardly and pathetic for the first 50 chapters is just plain moronic. Expecting people to wait 50 chapters for the protagonist to resemble anything decent is just presumptuous.

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Preston_Playz_8167
Preston_Playz_8167Lv4

you can't expect the mc to change suddenly at chapter 50. THIS IS A SLOW PACED NOVEL! Atleast read UPTO the latest chapter and you'll see

Tsetth
TsetthLv14

well, this didn't age well...

Nydre
NydreLv14

Nobody's about to pay just to see if a story they already don't like will get better, especially if it's a slow paced story.

Preston_Playz_8167:you can't expect the mc to change suddenly at chapter 50. THIS IS A SLOW PACED NOVEL! Atleast read UPTO the latest chapter and you'll see
Preston_Playz_8167
Preston_Playz_8167Lv4

are you forced to pay?

Nydre:Nobody's about to pay just to see if a story they already don't like will get better, especially if it's a slow paced story.
Preston_Playz_8167
Preston_Playz_8167Lv4

are you forced to read?

Nydre:Nobody's about to pay just to see if a story they already don't like will get better, especially if it's a slow paced story.
Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

yep agreed my go to are the author which have ~100 chapters not looked as by that time if someone stays he/she would surely continue to read forward and one can fully understand what type of novel it is example i remember read apocalypse novel where there's no mention/hint of any apocalypse till the time you hit the paywall

Nydre:Nobody's about to pay just to see if a story they already don't like will get better, especially if it's a slow paced story.
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