A good start... the premise is nice with the impression that Arthur( the MC) is op and all, but could do nothing due to some reasons. He has a lovely family with a sweet sister and something is definitely blooming between him and Myla. Well, the interactions can use some work, but overall a good story. Keep going.
Jovia Ninnicabolla
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