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The writing quality is grate as always 5/5 Update Stability: Looks like a 5 but, the odds of a break by chapter 20-29 are high So 2/5 Story Development: You lack CREATIVITY In all your stories you follow the plot entirely. With Ichigos mom death it’s obvious this will be the same as the rest. 2/5 Character Design: You want the MC to be Jotaro not just in looks/design but, also in personality. Honestly would make more sence if you just called it Jotaro in Bleach. 1/5 World Background: It’s Bleach That’s basically all there is to it(fill in the blank your self) 2/5

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Bleach: Along for the Journey

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