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OhhhhNooo
OhhhhNoooLv103yr
2021-10-24 01:37

The writing quality is grate as always 5/5 Update Stability: Looks like a 5 but, the odds of a break by chapter 20-29 are high So 2/5 Story Development: You lack CREATIVITY In all your stories you follow the plot entirely. With Ichigos mom death it’s obvious this will be the same as the rest. 2/5 Character Design: You want the MC to be Jotaro not just in looks/design but, also in personality. Honestly would make more sence if you just called it Jotaro in Bleach. 1/5 World Background: It’s Bleach That’s basically all there is to it(fill in the blank your self) 2/5

Bleach: Along for the Journey

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RavenClock
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Your character feels really stiff . And seriously no meaningful character interaction 15 years and no connection whatsoever? What? Then why the F is he trying to get stronger? Feels like you don't know how to write dialogue and you keep the character silent.

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RadioDemon
RadioDemonLv2

i love it is well made makes laught personally i cant wait to see how the mc presence will change the plot and i am keeping this in my library

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_Medeiros
_MedeirosLv2

the story started well but as the story developed I lost interest in the story that doesn't mean it's bad but I don't like it 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒

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universe_creation
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Amazing story. i'm looking forward to the future of the story.

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Baldysalino
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Best bleach fanfic I have read 👌 .

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Snipe_is_here
Snipe_is_hereLv3

The 777 God is a chill dude I like it ......................................................................................................

3yr
ViolentGardener
ViolentGardenerLv4

Jojo in bleach done well, what more can you ask for? The humours good, the writing is solid. My only complaint is how little the MC changes the plot, but the writing quality makes up for that.

3yr
leo26
leo26Lv12

Personally I really like it, the flow of the chapter is nice and the characters don't feel like robots and most importantly chapters are thicc.The onl minor issue I have is that it is following cannon currently but I don't mind as it is just the groundwork for te future and I hope to see more deviation from the Canon in future.👍👍👍

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Veber
VeberLv14

Like it, good story with long chapters and even gets emotional.

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