Review Detail of tsukareta in SHADOW INSANITY

The overall design of the characters, world background and pacing of the story so far has been executed pretty well so far. Although, the author has made quite a few grammatical and punctuation mistakes throughout the story. For example, some words hv been spelt wrong or repeated (e.g. it was the the book or helpo). Now, It’s up to author to go back and fix this. To leave this review on a good note, the stability of chapters seem to be very consistent with every chapter filled with detailed descriptions enabling the readers to visualise every scene. Hope this review serves not only as a way to improve yourself, but also motivate you. Good luck on your book! [img=recommend]