Read the first few chapters and it was really interesting and I wished to read it longer but *sigh* I don't have enough time but no worries I have kept it in my collection. The starting of the strip was well written as it directly grabbed the readers attention and as for the dialogues and characters styles, they are nicely done thou you can put more effort into it. world background is around the theme of the system a common yet popular topic which was a nice choice. And I liked your writing style, lastly keep up the good work author!!
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LIKEMain_Island:Hey! Thanks! You're the first one to review other than me to review my novel, and you even gave it 5 stars! I wish you well! haha