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Monarch_Of_Hell
Monarch_Of_HellLv42yr
2022-07-01 16:45

Started readign the first chapter and couldnt continue reading past it. This is a mess.[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Into The M.C.U with Three Gifts from God

Games_of_Karma
3.0
16 Chs

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Monarch_Of_Hell
Monarch_Of_HellLv4

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Snipe_is_here
Snipe_is_hereLv3

I highly recommended .......................................................................................................................

3yr

AoMaEr
AoMaErLv4

This is really really good. I am excited what he will do with nicl fury and those freaking manipulators who always say for the GREATER GOOD but are actually they are not really good people.. I really like this one as it is better than many and one of the best fanfic ever so, PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE.. MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE CHAPTERS...

3yr
JayGelani
JayGelaniLv3

This is a good book but some mistakes should be corrected in story making. The story is like fast paced. [img=coins][img=fp][img=exp]

3yr
Lardeen
LardeenLv14

Its true grade for this fanfic. I don't recommend it anybody to because its terrible mess. /\/\/\/\/\/\/\%\%\%\%\%$%$%\%\%\%\%$%%\%\%\%\%$\%$%$

3yr
Phil_Morris
Phil_MorrisLv12

writing quality is a mess bad grammar and he rushes things. all of tony stark getting kidnapped than escaping was 1 paragraph. he also barley updates. the story is messed up iron man 1 and 2 is happening at the same time for no reason.tony starks,odins,himenidals,etc all their characters are wrong and the story and writing is kind of bland it doesnt bring any excitement

2yr
MrPlatypus
MrPlatypusLv1

Practice grammar or use Grammarly. You should think about your wording as it can get a bit messy. You should also think about not information dumping. Give it to them in smaller portions instead, and it won't feel as overwhelming. You shouldn't take requests from readers as they often times don't know what they want until you give them to them, and it often times ruins either the story or the flow of it. Your way of conversation is making the story very boring. It feels like I'm reading a script. Use quotation marks instead. It is all about practice. Good luck.

2yr
Snipe_is_here
Snipe_is_hereLv3

JUST 6 REVIEWS!? ...........................................................................................................................

3yr
BlackDragneel
BlackDragneelLv4

If you continue I will give you 5 stars. If you continue I will give you 5 stars. If you continue I will give you 5 stars. If you continue I will give you 5 stars.

3yr
Tobi_One_Kenobi
Tobi_One_KenobiLv4

the fandom is really bad.you can even tell from the sypnosis.fake reviews to improve ratings.I would not recommend wasting your time with this

2yr
Pythia
PythiaLv12

When the author pays for reviews you know it's gonna be bad.....................................................................................

2yr
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