Review Detail of Belador in Eye of universe: The Replicator

Guys forgive me, but I'll have to take a break from the book, I'll have a lot of hours that will keep me out a lot, have a good amount, but it wasn't enough. In that time so that I can perhaps increase my skills as a writer, with a heart for those who read. I know some of the dialogue, or maybe the way the world is created is a little weird. But I feel like I'll get better, maybe I can even edit when I'm better at writing.