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Review Detail of Acheronta in Marvel : Different Peter Parker

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Wish fulfillment stories are not usually a trope that is about good writing. Usually it's mostly about bringing forth a vision of the author's, and this author has chosen to unify a large selection of world's and alter a large selection of stories into one. Reincarnated as Peter Parker, use of Haki, powers from Bleach. Story feels very rushed as well, as events that could be slowed down are explained in passing as if it is not important. The grammar can be excused because english is not the author's first language. However the switch from first person to third person is quite jarring and occurs haphazardly.

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