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Killem2much
Killem2muchLv43yr
2022-03-23 12:32

the MC is pretty much a decent nice guy which makes him pretty boring even now that he is a skeleton like many other isekai what I never got the point about turning the MC into monster/undead etc. if they are still gonna act human in all the ways possible. At least put some conflict in the persona, not asking for psycho killer maniac. Skipped most of the fights for the most part they are meh, the spells are convenient maybe too much feels like author avoids showing them in the level up so he can pull whatever helps him progress through the next fight. Something interesting needs to happen soon or least that comedy needs to show.

Why reincarnate as a useless skeleton?

Darksky_ll
4.4
99 Chs

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Darksky_ll
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Shameless self-review. (Let's be honest, almost all authors do it.) I started posting this story as a way to practice my writing and gain more confidence. I never thought it would place second in a WPC. I actually think the plot and story are pretty decent, my only problem would be the grammatical errors (English is not my native language.), but I will try to correct them if you let me know. I accept any criticism, comment or suggestion that can help me to improve as an author. So don't hesitate to tell me your opinions, even if they are a bit harsh. Thanks for reading, I hope I can continue writing this story until the end.

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DemiGod_of_Fate
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Lord_Heydrich
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5 Stars! This is has got to be one one of the best novels I've read! In fact it's so good that I actually decided to leave a review. I haven't left an actual review in around a year(not including exp reviews). Anyways it's super good. I personally love just about any story about Necromancers or Skeletons or Necromancer Skeletons. The MC is a cool skeleton necromancer dude, and his character is built super well. It's a tiny bit repetitive in the beginning, it has the usual "you killed this" " you leveled up" "you killed this" "you leveled up". But it gets better as your progress. The Author does a good job writing the fight scenes as well describing the environment and characters. As you get in the MC encounters civilization and is able to blend in and hide his his strength. This is also something I quit enjoy. I love reading about the cool, strong, mc's belding in with society and deceiving people. I'm not entirely sure about the consistency of updates, I just started reading this tonight, but the description says the Author updates 2-3 times a week. So based on that I'd say the updates are consistent. Additionally the chapters word count is in the 2,000's to 3,000's, so waiting a few days is worth it. It goes premium at chapter 47, but it's definitely worth using fast passes to keep reading. You can read 2 chapters ahead if you have the app (I don't). As I said the character design is done really good you can really connect with the mc in a way. Most of the MC's pre-reincarnation is hidden(as of right now), but it adds a certain sense of mystery to the MC. The World Background is also done stupendously. The Authors created his own fantasy world and has a done a good job introducing it. There's a chapter that introduces a lot of the background and the history of the world. One of the languages is a lost language called Germanium(I think I spelt that wrong), the author said it isn't German, but I refuse to believe that! The writing quality and the grammar is good, I haven't noticed any misspelled things, run-on sentences, punctuation errors. I think a reason for the updates times, is that the Author spends a lot of time going over and revises and fixing any mistakes. Additionally he gets feedback from the readers that helps him fix any mistakes. I can't really rate this area to well, as I'm German and English is a second language for me. But at least on my standards the grammar and just overall writing quality is awesome. All in all it's a super good story and I definitely would recommend reading.

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Subject_Omicron
Subject_OmicronLv13

i'm getting pretty tired of finding what seems to be a good story,but they have locked chapters i have to pay to read. i got this FREE app to read interesting,not pay for literally 70% of it sigh. sorry for the rant,i needed to say SOMETHING since i cant read it ill just give three stars to get my review out there

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NokoTaco
NokoTacoLv4

I like the story so far. The fact that he didn’t start out OP is refreshing when compared to other Monster Reincarnation stories. Though it gets a little hard to understand for me sometimes, it is still an interesting read.

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Nmastte
NmastteLv2

the number of inconsistencies is unbearable, the same ones found in all the most cliché isekai stories make me say that the story is nothing special in any case my suspension of disbelief was broken very quickly

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TBS_23
TBS_23Lv14

Love novels with systems and evolution... Especially when the MC seems to have standard human brain... Tired of foolish MCs who cann't seem to keep their own secrets or are afraid to go against powers even though there is no threat... Cann't wait to see which undead he ends up as...

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Great book, i'm enjoying the story so far. I just don't know what will happen from now on, but I'm still pretty curious! keep up the good work author!

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