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haila2907
haila2907Lv42yr
2022-05-28 14:02

tbh I really enjoyed reading the story first but after more than 300 chaps the storyline felt bleak .even the ml didn't feel the tension over xue ni he was still behaving as if everything was normal though. I agree that he considered her as his sister but overtimes he really overlooked her actions especially after around 480 chaps . and that misunderstanding n ol parts to separate them . even his brother shi Yu did so many poor acts how come ml suddenly became dumb related to such matters and the background portraits it that he so smart n ruthless his constantly feeling of jealousy but overtime it became so dull especially, even the repetition of scenes like now fl lost balance one time one person holds her another time another it was like tossing around

Excuse Me, I Am The Real Female Lead

Mountain Springs
4.1
593 Chs

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