Author here. Thank you guys for checking out and reading my first attempt at writing a novel. I would highly appreciate any feedback in the reviews and you are welcome to message me on webnovel about the novel. Thank you again!!
Viincentt
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LIKEWhen the main character is older but this novel won't be focusing on romance though. Thank you for taking the time and reading
GM43ver:will there be romance.
I've been reading and I found that there is a lack of presence about the mc, I feel like you should try to focus on the mc as a person and those around him. For example relationships he may have and things he mayike to do in his off time. Make it more than a summary or his companies achievements each chapter. Who is the mc, What makes the mc himself
Vince Dalton is the MC. I compare him to Tony Stark, as an intelligent and successful businessman. The synopsis may be confusing if you're unfamiliar with Iron Man (Tony Stark). Sorry about that. I've been thinking of an updated synopsis for newer readers for a while now
LazyCrown:Who is vince Dalton? Is that tony stark? Is tHat like his Real name or tony father?
Viincentt:Vince Dalton is the MC. I compare him to Tony Stark, as an intelligent and successful businessman. The synopsis may be confusing if you're unfamiliar with Iron Man (Tony Stark). Sorry about that. I've been thinking of an updated synopsis for newer readers for a while now
Viincentt:Sorry about the release schedule. I am still taking my final exams for the fall semester.
Viincentt:Vince Dalton is the MC. I compare him to Tony Stark, as an intelligent and successful businessman. The synopsis may be confusing if you're unfamiliar with Iron Man (Tony Stark). Sorry about that. I've been thinking of an updated synopsis for newer readers for a while now
The author should already start introducing or mentioning of Boca Cica as their space (star basen ) base what Elon builds his ships there and let them start building there. Or you can mantion about Discovery of High offsetmaterial and Neutralstate superconductor. That's my recomendation. P.S. You shoud read a book like I have Super USB Drive
GrrodGroot2002:The author should already start introducing or mentioning of Boca Cica as their space (star basen ) base what Elon builds his ships there and let them start building there. Or you can mantion about Discovery of High offsetmaterial and Neutralstate superconductor. That's my recomendation. P.S. You shoud read a book like I have Super USB Drive
I am not saying you should do harem . but romance is necessary ☺️..... it would just be boring without it..... . read ( I'm a baller ) has best money earning & romance story, in which main focus is on wealth...... . furthermore, has all the wealth, character, relationship, funny.... & other aspects of development too...!!!😅
Viincentt:When the main character is older but this novel won't be focusing on romance though. Thank you for taking the time and reading
Young_fruit_Smiley:I am not saying you should do harem . but romance is necessary ☺️..... it would just be boring without it..... . read ( I'm a baller ) has best money earning & romance story, in which main focus is on wealth...... . furthermore, has all the wealth, character, relationship, funny.... & other aspects of development too...!!!😅
What will be the level of technology that the MC will have by the end of this novel? Are aliens humanoid or not? It's a great novel and I can't seem to find other business novels on the level of this or ones with male MC (I'm not a misogynist there's just too many of "regressed woman/wife of cool husband jajshssk" than the decent ones). Just hoped that the release rate will be faster.
I’m writing the story as I go. I have a rough trajectory for the plot, but the tech level in the later chapters is hard to tell. Even I’m not so sure. Probably interstellar space travel would take a long time to develop
bored_filipino:What will be the level of technology that the MC will have by the end of this novel? Are aliens humanoid or not? It's a great novel and I can't seem to find other business novels on the level of this or ones with male MC (I'm not a misogynist there's just too many of "regressed woman/wife of cool husband jajshssk" than the decent ones). Just hoped that the release rate will be faster.
Kyoran:una pregunta porque despues de desbloquear los nuevo capitulos no los puedo traducir al español?