Item: Beast Awakening: Evolving Legendary Beasts
Rating: 3.2
Author: Immortal_Nova325

Immortal_Nova325Lv152yr

2022-04-15 23:10

so I've read all 20 of the available chapters and the first 3 chapters seem like the author didn't like what he was writing and accidently forgot to delete those first few chapters before he started writing the rest of the story is okay I'd say nothing extravagant it has its moments but it kinda ruined the story for me when the whole story changed in the 4th or 5th chapter but the rest of the writing after the mess up in the first three are decent but the most I'd give it is a Meh

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