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FallenAngeI
FallenAngeILv132yr
2022-04-25 23:14

I am up to the latest non-priv chapter, so here we go: Writing Quality: First of all English isn't my first language so this is from my point of view. There are some minor mistakes from time to time that the author fixes as soon as they are pointed out so I don't have problems in that department. Stability of Updates: 2 chapters per day is 5 stars as well. Nothing more to say here. Story Development: So far I like the where the story is heading, there are some twists and turns. I like what happened in the latest chapters (Don't want to spoil anything in the review so I will leave it here). Character Design: There is development in MC's character from the earlier chapters which is satisfactory for me, and from what I am seeing in the latest chapters he will evolve even more. There isn't a lot of focus on FLs in the early chapters so I think we will see more progress with them and side characters in the future. World Background: That's the only thing that is lacking in my opinion. All of the descriptions of empires, capital ciites and so on are kinda hollow for me, there could be more details later on to make the immersion greater. I will still rate it 5 stars so the review stays at 5 stars but the story is good enough to have overall 5 star rating.

Virtual World : Pocket Sanctuary

ChaosWriter
4.7
128 Chs

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ChaosWriter
ChaosWriterAuthor

Thanks For leaving a review. 😍 As you have already caught up, I think you know how the game world would be now. So, you will see more of the world background.

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Suicidal_Fox
Suicidal_FoxLv11

Is this a another vr world that merges with the real world?

ChaosWriter:Thanks For leaving a review. 😍 As you have already caught up, I think you know how the game world would be now. So, you will see more of the world background.
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A good VR game novel. MC wasn't OP from the start, but I can see him become one. There's also some mystery. Author's writing is also improving gradually. I don't know if much of the concept in unique or not, but I am seeing some of them for the first time. And its really good. That's all for now. PS: Can't comment on FL as they haven't played much part till the latest chap yet. To Author: If you are gonna do harem, don't include more than 3 girls. Thank you.

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Now that 50 Chaps are up, I am updating my previous review. This is my first novel after reading webnovels for than 2 years, so except some grammatical mistakes. I would be happy to correct any mistakes if you readers point it out. The main reason MC is playing the VR game is for money. So, he doesn't have grand ambitions like be the top player, etc. The MC gradually becomes an OP character due to factors like future knowledge, some unexpected gains, etc. Everything he does, he plans it and takes no. of measures in case of failures taking full advantage of his perfect memory due to reason unknown. There are 3 main FL's that are really important characters. Yes, they will be in MC's harem. But, the harem matter won't happen for 200 some chapters and it won't be some stupid forced harem like collecting Pokémon. So, do give it a try even if you don't like harem. Some mysteries are there. And lastly, you can ask any question you would like to in here. I will answer all of them. Thanks For Reading My Novel.

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FIRST THING FIRST.!!!!!!! to any one that dont like multiple reincarnation then this is not for you cuz the mc is not the only ibe to reincarnate so with that out of the way this novel is alright not good, bad bad either if im to say 50/50..... the reason for this is i dont like multiple reincarnation novel. sigh... the author should put a multiple rencarnation warning

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5 stars from me Truth be told i just randomly decided to read because i was bored and looking through some comments on an event and i saw this, and so i decided to read it. I wasn't really expecting much from the start and expecting it to be like most other vr games iwas actually quite shocked. Also another reason for me thinking the novel is good is because i took the time to search it click it and add to to library and thats not impressive idk what is.

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I was just WOW-ed while reading this. As a noob in this genre, I want to praise the author for giving a detailed description that even someone like me can understand. The MC isn't OP from the start (just the way I like it), and I'm looking forward for his growth! Good job author-san! Keep up the good work! [img=recommend]

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