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2022-09-19 15:33

Love the story, hate the paywall xD. But seriously it's my favourite werewolf story I read. It's unique that Alpha's mate is human and that he doesn't have geolocation of her. I like how Nate realized that Lara is his mate and he has pups with her after meeting her after six years immediately instead of usual in C-novels hundreds of chapters where FL hide fact of children's father's identity from ML. I love also that while FL was virgin and didn't have other men than ML he was also inexperienced and then completely loyal during their break. I hate it when FL has to be pure while ML was fooling around with other women. I really love ML. He is perfect husband and father for hurt and traumatized Lara and children. I admire his patience to always put Lara first and let her take first step in intimacy instead of usual CEO's molesting FL to get her agree to sleep with him. And I really like that Lara needs some time to feel comfortable instead of going with him to bed because they're mates and it makes them attracted to each other. And love their gradual developing relationship. They actually get to know each other, go on dates, start with hugs and kisses to develop naturally to getting married soon. It is what really lacks in novels. I like their courtship even though they already have children. And Jaden and Scarlet are great. Love how protective they are of their mother and that they show some difficulties after being raised by single mother. They act like children their own age even if they are more mature and sensible because Lara had to leave them alone when she worked. Firstly neither children nor Nate were happy about each other. Then we see why they need father and that Nate fulfills that role even if in the beginning he didn't love his children yet. Their relationship also gradually developed from dislike to being comfortable with each other to loving each other. And even though Nate was reluctant of being father in the beginning though he still wanted his children and being constantly jealous of them taking all his mate's attention he still worked hard to get his children affection even if it was because Lara loves their children. Now he totally loves them and children also accepted him as their father. Review is only for first 300 chapters because like I said I hate paywall and need to gather fast-passes to continue story.

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Thank you for the review! <3 I'm glad you like it

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