Guys I made several mistakes in this ff, so i do not recommend to read it I was considering this as a learning project and I made a lot of mistakes and that's a big reason why I don't recommend reading it.

The writing quality is pretty good its very easy to read with little to no mistakes. You update more than most people do a month. The characters feels really dull and lifeless. Asta doesn't even say their name. It's just "Wife", no saying their real names just wife. Then his wives don't call him his name just "Husband. Then he got all of the harem members so fast no real meaning full development. I like who the harem members are but you need to make them have a better love life than just "HuSbAnD" or "WiFe" The background is a harem black clover i just wish it was better

I write this review as one of the thousands of notices that I put, I suppose that if they read it, first of all it is an alternate universe where I will do everything to my liking, and also things would develop quite quickly because more than a fanfic it is a project I'm doing to learn some things. If you don't like things to unfold too quickly or anything typical, don't even bother reading.

dude this is so cliche i almost ate my pillow 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 at least not me

The fanfic has great potantioal. It is very interesting to read. The only problem I see is the grammer. There are mistakes like she insted of he or something along the lines, but it is not something that really bothers.

The story is great, but I was a little confused in the latest chapters, he and his wives just invaded the magic knight exams and challenged three captains to a battle, I was very confused in this part, but other than that I have no complaints.

I want lemons 🍋 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭but it is still good 😘✌✌✌✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍✌😍😍💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

Great novel just don't drop.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

It's good🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍🥰😍😍🥰😍😍😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰🤩🥰🤩🤩🥰🤩🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰🤩🥰

Great novel, this is one of the best black clover fanfic that i have ever read. Every character feels like they have life and emotions. Even Yuno who somehow became an arrogant and villain at first got his redemption and have someone who loves him. Every character too have its own story. The battles are great too and exciting. So for me this is 5 stars. Please keep up the good work👍👍👍👍