Author needs to proof read work before posting, has too much grammatical mistakes. The story is interesting as it goes on. But there are distractions. Hope you improve as you go along. Cheers!
KimBarbie
Liked it!
LIKEThe distraction comes from a lot of errors and grammar mistakes. The book is interesting but hopefully you give time to edit/proof read as well before posting. Thanks for reading my review!
KimBarbie:i will like if you could point out the distractions,i do not understand.