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the world you set up is unique in its own way. I do think that you should run it through an editor app or a editor due to run on sentences and improve on inner thought and outer thought writing so it is easier to follow for a reader. and I suggest smaller paragraphs for those who read on mobile phones it makes it hard to read

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8 The Infinite

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