Review Detail of rdsafdasdf in Diligently Train For 1,000,000,000,000 Years! Become Unrivaled!

Hello, Sanna Yuri here! I discovered your novel through a bot (guess they're good for something) and quickly read through it! I decided to write a review, from amateur writer to amateur writer. I'm not sure how the story is going to develop - considering the MC just finished his training - but in my opinion you could have trimmed a bit of the training, or compiled it into one or two chapters (they are not that long anyway). Aside from that, your actual grammar and vocabulary is quite good! I'm excited to see where this novel goes! Bye!