Review Detail of Arizona_Montana in Another World Chronicles

Item: Another World Chronicles
Rating: 4.6

Review detail

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I love this story. But the you keep switching genders and sometimes the sentences don’t make any sense. Maybe it improves later on as I read more but for now it needs some work

Another World Chronicles

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Dimas_PratamaAuthorDimas_Pratama

Thanks for critique. Actually i want to use consistent such as hiro and allen as he. while Yumi and Rina as She. Anyway thanks again for correction

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