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Sage_Surge
Sage_SurgeLv147mth
2024-11-22 19:08

Read it all and found it to be a good idea for plot, but a poor execution. Poor grammar, simple pacing, odd character rush intro, and repetitive descriptions. Good things are a unique writing style and emotional sentence construction. However, the killer of the story is lack of update schedule. Don't read unless necessarily too bord.

Sexual fantasy

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3.7
46 Chs

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Thigh_Master0124
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AnimeAmvCaster
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Aim_MASTER
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