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ciez
ciezLv113yr
2022-05-28 16:32

story seems promising at first. then author became idiot, killed mcs father mother, everyone in family. what a terrible writing. it doesn't deserve even 1 star.

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3.7
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Thigh_Master0124
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Oh well it's as if author got bored and decided to kill everyone! Pretty mature story for webnovel okay I guess? Was worth or not worth still kinda weird ending.

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