Alright I'm done with this, The amount of MC naivety and stupidity is astonishing. repeating bad decision & not properly planning. I can stand if you want MC have Hero personality but at least give him some brain. rescuing hostage without plan only to get ambushed and that is pretty often, trusting police too much (arresting villain only to get next week got out of prison). Also I don't like your choice of template, deku, Cedric diggory, Ikki kurogane? c'mon this is marvel and that is not MCU but mix with comics and villain there is so OP that can bend reality itself like apocalypse and thanos, and you giving him template of *weak character (based on marvel powerscale) especially deku & Ikki, you know that after they using their power their body get wrecked and that is fatal weakness in fight, at least give him 1 OP template that have not visible weakness. you did good with Madara though.
MynameJeff
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LIKEThe OFA power arrived with izuku template and once he mastered it, he got rid of the body wrong king weakness. Cedric was right at the moment, had I introduced op character at the start, my story would have lost the element I was trying to give it. Madara was chosen by the people Thanks for the review