first part is good but it falls off due to I think that the tensura world just isn't a good world for this mc ...............................................................................
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LIKEwho said the magic system has to be as powerful as ensure to be a good story?? although I don't like harry potter much I think it would be a better world
unit_201:This is a book about Science VS Magic, I'm not familiar with any other magic systems that's remotely a strong as this one. Like Overlord? Ha! They're at best City Level and nowhere near as Hax as Tensura. Maybe some Cultivation Novels but I'm not familiar with any Cultivation Stories
There is already .a Science VS Magic with Harry Potter and it's far better than whatever I could write. It's called Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality. I created this story partially due to me being bored at the overabundance of magic instead of science
ObamaUchiha:who said the magic system has to be as powerful as ensure to be a good story?? although I don't like harry potter much I think it would be a better world