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Review Detail of WinnieLePooh in Inspired Inventor (Tensura AU)

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WinnieLePooh
WinnieLePoohLv132yrWinnieLePooh

Alright, this is an amazingly written story thought I do have some discrepancies like how the author got strong handed into changing on of his descions which I hated, and how this is way to fcukcing advanced for my feeble mind to understand oh lord you would not believe the amount of times I had pulled up Google and just googled over and over and over every single chapter a new thing would be introduced and boom in Google it went and I was reading a long as wiki page, then I would give up look at a summary and finally go "Oh, but then how does this fit with the story? And how does this work then.." like with the Maxwell's demon I was totally and utterly lost in its application with the story. 5/5 Writing. 3/5 Story Development and Character Design cause I started to disagree with the characters choices and how it affected the overall story. 5/5 Updating, author has kept up their work daily. 2/5 World Background as I'm including this as the power applications and the different theories that she uses for her weapon and how the majority of the time I had to stop reading and read a wiki page which ruined the flow of the story for me, it was either that or just not understand the story which is stupid.

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Inspired Inventor (Tensura AU)

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unit_201Authorunit_201

I mean, this is a Sci-Fi vs Magic story grounded in using real world science, so the techno-babble should be expected. If you really want your mind to bend at how technical other Sci-Fi novels get, just try and read the VS-Battle wiki page for the Xeelee. I was inspired a lot by other Sci-fi novels and sought to incorporate as much of them into the book as it's reasonably possible, plus I stated in the description this book is an exploration into high sci-fi concepts which would undoubtedly include theoretical physics and the fringes of known science.

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unit_201Authorunit_201

The Maxwell's Demon was a hypothetical way to violate the laws of thermodynamics, I described True Dragons as Maxwell's Demons because of how they violate entropy

WinnieLePooh
WinnieLePoohLv13WinnieLePooh

You just have more brain cells than me mate, congrats on keeping them all healthy and alive, all of mine are dead

unit_201:The Maxwell's Demon was a hypothetical way to violate the laws of thermodynamics, I described True Dragons as Maxwell's Demons because of how they violate entropy