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2021-10-16 15:05

I gave the writing quality five stars for how descriptive it is, even though there are places where it is obvious that English isn't the writer's native language. Despite the occasional confusion, the characters are well portrayed and the story flows well. I can't imagine writing as much every day as has been posted so far, but... well done, and may you be able to carry on comfortably.

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