Is they're a reason every Chinese novel has Qi in it?????? I mean it cool and all but it just doesn't fit here at all. Combining science, Qi/Mana, when it'll be the same novel even without it perhaps better. Like DC Comic's Doomsday only the starting point is the Weak Human genome instead of alien. However adding Qi just makes it weird, like this mistic energy "Qi/Mana" evolved everything else but not the Humans. If you used the prehistoric earth as a reference it would have been an awesome read, like the earth regressed now we have bigger animals. What a waste of a good story.
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what I was saying is in this story qi/mana doesn't fit because the entire book up until the first mention of qi/mana is based on science. when one adds qi/mana and changes the basis the book is written on, destroys the book that was already awesome.
alsiee:Because Qi is their word for mana... You can have magic in a scientific world. Nothing says the two worlds are mutually exclusive