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UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv122yr
2022-07-27 12:15

I don't know if my review was deleted or my memory slipped, anyway this is harem so it's worthless trash unfit for sane individuals. Basically this is why harem will forever be trash, the name has "WIFE" but he gets a harem and his "WIFE" basically hates him for most of the novel, of course the mc is stronger than his "WIFE" because screw the title. Of course you can't forget the "Everyone conspires against him for no reason" add a bit of "Everyone get's so surprised how powerful he is, even though he was supposed to be a playboy waste, he's able to solve every situation and we'll just ignore the guy outsmarting everyone and label him as still being a playboy" to get a small fraction of the trash cliche part, next is the fact that we don't even see the other females at the beginning, they have no history with the man, and suddenly the "Mass murdering female general wife" Is ok with multiple people dating her husband after 5 seconds of knowing him. Harem is only good to ruin stories and draw in gullible teenagers to warp their view on how relationships work, just to earn 5 more dollars by writing something without even putting work into the side-wives. Alright that'll be all for my rant on the worst type of book genre, so bad anything with it is automatically worthless trash. For the story it's cliche trash, borderline qidian, but good enough that you can't fully turn your brain off to actually read the thing.

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GrandpaPeng
GrandpaPengLv4

1 star ratings get deleted, ce n so. red. Some copy paste the same comment but with higher star rating. That's how you do it ;p

UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

yeah i figured but my memory lasts for 1 day and i forget everything that happened, that's kind of why I now save my reviews on my discord so i can remember the novel and the review.

GrandpaPeng:1 star ratings get deleted, ce n so. red. Some copy paste the same comment but with higher star rating. That's how you do it ;p
Kyoma_6084
Kyoma_6084Lv1

I really feel like reading a story with just a wife without a harem so I'm going to skip this.

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