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not_bob_builderLv23yr
2021-12-05 02:32

I tried I really did, but seriously the Mc is pretty much unkillable the moment he starts the story the rest is face slapping and sucking up to the mc after he kills high level beasts no one else near his city could. Then when he goes out beasts are really strong for no reason it literally says why is such a strong beast so near the walls then never brings it up again they're to busy face slapping and having important people suck up to the mc. There's also the fact that him having a huge storage space doesn't make people think he's part of a faction somehow "this expert must be at the peak level because his storage is huge, but he must be new because he asked for a knife to cut some materials." In conclusion the translation work is okay, but the story itself is not very good at all

Starting With One Million Luck Points

I am Second Senior
3.3
1234 Chs

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His crush to sleep with him? Aight amm head out 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃😗🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃😗😗🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃

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this is just a wish fulfillment story. like seriously all he has to do is kill+open boxes. Webnovel doesn't understand that it has become monotonous and boring. but these novels still keep coming, i reckon there is no quality control on webnovel

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Bah! What sort of trashy forced plot is this. For the next few days I’m going to do a mandatory 1 star review to spite webnovel for picking this trash!

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