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If your going to MTL, you need to have good editors. Names change from paragraph to paragraph. Nothing is consistent. There's full blown untranslated paragraphs. An entire chapter is repeated with slightly different translation. It's a mess. The sorry itself is nothing to write home about either. Constantly retconning itself; "I gained a lot of experience, and in fact I had taken a 5x experience portion too, that I made with ingredients I bought and never mentioned any of that until after it had already happened." The MC supposedly has future knowledge, but it almost never comes up after the very beginning. The MC's sister is a big concern, then ignored completely. The MC is so OP so quickly there's never any tension. The stats system doesn't get much mention, even though stats are such a big deal, and supposedly the MC is gaining extra points during level up sometimes, those are mentioned once and then never again in the preview 40 chapters. It was already a mess, then it was poorly translated on top of that.

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The World Awakens: Ten Consecutive Draws Before Invincibility

Levelling Up Alone

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I can't believe I complained about the need for editing, and also used the wrong "you're" in the first sentence.