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mithun
mithunLv123yr
2021-12-10 17:59

I have mixed feelings about this book.story is above average but compared to other cooking novel it's not good. main problem of this story is 8 year old mc with parants whose brain is dead.everyone reacting positive when seeing an 8 year old working ,some parents even rebuking there children because they don't work at same age.no one care he us going to school or not. every one viewing him as adult. if author make him atleast 18 I can read novel without damaging my brain.second problem is story is very fast paced. fell like commen wishfullfillng novel instead of cooking novel.

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Darren_Laudat
Darren_LaudatLv3

Would love a rare cooking novel picked

Itsmeagain
ItsmeagainLv13

I see.

Fork_Dork
Fork_DorkLv2

this is as much quality as we can get nowadays...better than nothing

Darren_Laudat
Darren_LaudatLv3

And it's a lesser done non eastern fantasy novel

Fork_Dork:this is as much quality as we can get nowadays...better than nothing
mithun
mithunLv12

this week is different there is few good novels released including one written by I eat tomatoes

Fork_Dork:this is as much quality as we can get nowadays...better than nothing
Darren_Laudat
Darren_LaudatLv3

Depends if you like the genre

mithun:this week is different there is few good novels released including one written by I eat tomatoes
DolanTramp
DolanTrampLv2

The reason why he is 8 is due to lazy writing. Romance? Not possible because hes 8. Deep scheming? Not possible because hes 8. Complicated friendcircle? Not possible because hes 8. People flirting with him a lot? Not possible because hes 8. Complicated Past? Not possible because hes 8. A lot of knowledge? Not Possible because hes 8. People underestimating you aka a lot of faceslaps? Yes because hes 8

Frontfold
FrontfoldLv3

lol

DolanTramp:The reason why he is 8 is due to lazy writing. Romance? Not possible because hes 8. Deep scheming? Not possible because hes 8. Complicated friendcircle? Not possible because hes 8. People flirting with him a lot? Not possible because hes 8. Complicated Past? Not possible because hes 8. A lot of knowledge? Not Possible because hes 8. People underestimating you aka a lot of faceslaps? Yes because hes 8
mithun
mithunLv12

his mind is 21.. author didn't even tried to create good background that means no friends with different characters.. author didn't Evan want to 8 year go to school.or didn't even say anything about it

DolanTramp:The reason why he is 8 is due to lazy writing. Romance? Not possible because hes 8. Deep scheming? Not possible because hes 8. Complicated friendcircle? Not possible because hes 8. People flirting with him a lot? Not possible because hes 8. Complicated Past? Not possible because hes 8. A lot of knowledge? Not Possible because hes 8. People underestimating you aka a lot of faceslaps? Yes because hes 8
DolanTramp
DolanTrampLv2

What about his mind being 21? Its not like the people around him see him and say: Wow we should [insert one of the things which i said..] against this fellow because he looks like hes 8 but his mind is 21 years old. Like i mentioned, lazy writing. He knows that he cant do that so he made him 8 which also means he doesnt need to add it

mithun:his mind is 21.. author didn't even tried to create good background that means no friends with different characters.. author didn't Evan want to 8 year go to school.or didn't even say anything about it
fanatics
fanaticsLv3

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Chibaku_Monster
Chibaku_MonsterLv13

i agree with your comment it doesn't make any sense but you have to admit that he is not in his original world where people are more rational and have sense. so I'd say this novel is a 1/4 fantasy with all the weird types of food like food wars were food can make a person org*sm I real life food will taste amazing and you can't stop eating it but never a foodgasm so I'd just roll with it

Darren_Laudat
Darren_LaudatLv3

GOAW Mc had no romance and he was an adult but no romance makes story better

DolanTramp:The reason why he is 8 is due to lazy writing. Romance? Not possible because hes 8. Deep scheming? Not possible because hes 8. Complicated friendcircle? Not possible because hes 8. People flirting with him a lot? Not possible because hes 8. Complicated Past? Not possible because hes 8. A lot of knowledge? Not Possible because hes 8. People underestimating you aka a lot of faceslaps? Yes because hes 8
DolanTramp
DolanTrampLv2

And? Whats even your point lol? And you do realize that there are people that wont know what the shortage of your letters is right? Or even that there are other people that like romance?

Darren_Laudat:GOAW Mc had no romance and he was an adult but no romance makes story better
Darren_Laudat
Darren_LaudatLv3

And yet many don't want romance in novels and initials are still commonly used

DolanTramp:And? Whats even your point lol? And you do realize that there are people that wont know what the shortage of your letters is right? Or even that there are other people that like romance?
DolanTramp
DolanTrampLv2

Love it how you only concentrate on the things which you dont like and ignore everything else. What does it even matter if initials are commonly used? You could use it on a novel with like 5 readers but it doesnt mean that you should because no one knows that novel. Like your example. Also there are more people that like romance than people that dislike it. I still dont even know what your point is.

Darren_Laudat:And yet many don't want romance in novels and initials are still commonly used
Darren_Laudat
Darren_LaudatLv3

your taking this way too deeply

DolanTramp:Love it how you only concentrate on the things which you dont like and ignore everything else. What does it even matter if initials are commonly used? You could use it on a novel with like 5 readers but it doesnt mean that you should because no one knows that novel. Like your example. Also there are more people that like romance than people that dislike it. I still dont even know what your point is.
DolanTramp
DolanTrampLv2

Yeah.. sure bud. If you say so

Darren_Laudat:your taking this way too deeply
DaoistElkDVQ
DaoistElkDVQLv2

b

Deku_Deku_3204
Deku_Deku_3204Lv3

I love tomatoes work, What did he do this time ?

mithun:this week is different there is few good novels released including one written by I eat tomatoes
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