Review Detail of Vincent_Kun in Naruto and Sasuke in DXD
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couldve been better if naruto and sasuke has different books instead in being one, having sasuke pop out in the next chapter just destroys my immersion ngl
Naruto and Sasuke in DXD
God_Child
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DW, me is a type of person who doesn't anything offensive (except ...u know...) me was stating my reasonings to the problem that you faced and nothing else so yeah, thanks for it!! UmU!!
Vincent_Kun:Just saying my opinion there, hope u wont take offense here and the future. Aside from me getting yeeted out fron my immersion, everything is good. keep it up.
I see and get your point. Actually I am trying to run both of them in parallels so that readers know what's going on from both the perspectives. And making two books for different character is a good idea but in my opinion, it's a little inefficient. Like people should be aware that there are two books and even if they know, some just check out either of the one which damages the immersion. I wonder if u r getting what I am trying to say UmU!!
Just saying my opinion there, hope u wont take offense here and the future. Aside from me getting yeeted out fron my immersion, everything is good. keep it up.
God_Child:I see and get your point. Actually I am trying to run both of them in parallels so that readers know what's going on from both the perspectives. And making two books for different character is a good idea but in my opinion, it's a little inefficient. Like people should be aware that there are two books and even if they know, some just check out either of the one which damages the immersion. I wonder if u r getting what I am trying to say UmU!!