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So far, this is probably one of my favorite fanfics on this site and def my fav marvel/dc one. The grammar is really good, I really like the main character and his power system, and I think the pacing is excellent as well. I actually decided to torture myself a little bit and put this book on hold to stockpile chapters because I like it so much. If I had any critiques, it would mainly be with the side characters being sort of underdeveloped from what I've read (up to ch 60), and also, while I have been stockpiling, I know he spent some time in the LOTR universe which I'm not sure how I'll feel about, but who knows, I may like it anyways. On the note of side characters, I think his mentor-disciple relationship with Peter is really cool, and would love it if we got more moments between the two, especially fighting together. Lastly, I'm just gonna shoot my shot anyway and see if I get a response...do you have plans to make this a harem story, or will it continue to remain as just a Diana pairing (personally, I hope so)? This review will probably be buried under the other ones though, so I guess I'll just have to read it to find out, which I don't really mind lol. Ah, on that note, I think some more moments with Diana and even Edward's parents would be cool as well (his mom seemed interesting). Overall, great job.
Marvel: Mortal Ascension
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This won't become a harem, that I'm sure of. For now, I also plan to keep his relationship with Diana until the end of the novel, but I also might make them break up. I don't really want to do it for now, nor do I plan to do so, but like this if I ever change my mind people won't use this to argue. So for the foreseeable future, it will remain only an Edward/Diana pairing, and will probably remain like that for the rest of the story. And I am aware of the problem with side characters, I try to keep them relevant but it's hard with the number of characters.
That's so refreshing to hear lol, 95% percent of these comic fanfics are harems nowadays (and poorly done too lol). Also, I understand about the side character thing, I just thought it would be cool to see some extra chapters with their interactions, maybe as bonus chapters when you hit milestones. Just a thought tho, keep up the great work
SlyOW:This won't become a harem, that I'm sure of. For now, I also plan to keep his relationship with Diana until the end of the novel, but I also might make them break up. I don't really want to do it for now, nor do I plan to do so, but like this if I ever change my mind people won't use this to argue. So for the foreseeable future, it will remain only an Edward/Diana pairing, and will probably remain like that for the rest of the story. And I am aware of the problem with side characters, I try to keep them relevant but it's hard with the number of characters.