Hello there, first of all I would like to say that I'm not a native english speaking guy. And before writing this review I kept trying to read this through 50 chapters. To be honest when the writter claimed this "While I did put only Marvel into the title, it is actually a Marvel/DC fanfic. Why did I do this? Because most Marvel/DC stories until now sucked" I thought wow, that's a powerfull statement saying that all the other writers sucked but he apparently had what it takes to do better, I was seduced and gave it a shot ... And how to say how desapointed I was... this story is flavorless, then again it is my own opinion and I'm not judging the readers (at least i'm not as judging as the writer himself) some part seemed rushed, other not detailed enough, going from today's to the past and Tolkien mentions well the writers keeps fuelling ideas without constructing his story enough. Also this is not even a story about going weak to strong as at his second fight the hero is fighting people who rivaled wonderwoman and survived when a week before he didn't even do sports .... his power came from who knows where as I said no construction, reflexion and consolidation of the story. A huge desapointment for me, if the writer was not so full of himself I might have been less arsh probably but when you point at others saying they suck you must be prepared to be judged as well (Sorry again for my rusty english)
SlyOW
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LIKEit not unique it just cultivation just it describes with lot simpler war by showing step by step process
qowdkcijuefdhxsink:His power is very unique and you will understand if you read more. but sadly you dropped this novel. This is one of the best novel in terms of mc power. his power is very unique in marvel
Oh thank god I didn't read it. Cultivation is such a disappointing power. Does it have the ever percent young master trope?
FluxleX:it not unique it just cultivation just it describes with lot simpler war by showing step by step process
Knived:Oh thank god I didn't read it. Cultivation is such a disappointing power. Does it have the ever percent young master trope?
no..? but you can try reading it if you like the process how a cultivation is done by the first person.
Knived:Oh thank god I didn't read it. Cultivation is such a disappointing power. Does it have the ever percent young master trope?
Great_Young_Master:It's a story in Webnovel. It's like a tradition to have young masters.image
Venerable_Adam:where else do you read stories other than fanfction.net and ao3 and wattpad