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Review Detail of Xapon in Marvel: Mortal Ascension

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Xapon
XaponLv12yrXapon

I read 20 chapters and realized that it's just not mine. The main and side characters are quite one-dimensional, the world is developing weakly and it is clear that the merger of dc and Marvel is not too complex. I don't think this fan fiction is something terrible, but because of the poor quality of the merging of worlds, I don't want to read too much. Just a piece of advice for the future, when you try to unite the worlds on a larger scale: the most difficult part for joining these two multiverse is the chaotic nature of almost all spheres of the universe in dc. While in Marvel, outer space is divided by several space empires, the magic sphere is defended by several orders of powerful Magicians, and interdimensional jumps occur VERY rarely, while in DC, the whole cosmos is pure chaos from a multitude of one or two planetary empires that appear and disappear over several decades, where the only islands of tranquility are the territories of lantern corps, only Dr. Faith is seriously engaged in the magisphere and every few years a hero or villain from an alternate universe appears. I don't think it's possible to combine these two diametrically opposed worlds at all, but I still wish you good luck in this. Translated via Google translation

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Damian0481
Damian0481Lv13Damian0481

you are probably the only real review xd

Totem_The_Other
Totem_The_OtherLv5Totem_The_Other

curious, do you mean Dr Fate instead of Dr Faith? and what about Constantine, and his friend, the rhyming demon that merged with a knight? Merlin, the one who did the merge to save the knight? I'm sure there are others, but those are the ones at the top of my head. sure it's not like Marvel's order of mystics, but there are people who dabble in magic, but the biggest difference is the cost of power for the mystics that differenciate the 2 world... marvel connect the sorcerer to the realm of power, while dc makes a pact with the devil, and that's why there's so little mages in DC, I'm rambling, but yes, you correct

Xapon
XaponLv1Xapon

Konstantin is anyone, but not the guardian of the magical sphere, he very often created more problems than he solved. Etrigan, from what I remember, prefers not to interfere in all this confusion, but when everything is very bad, he joins other magicians. Perhaps I forgot to mention Zatanna in my initial speech, but compared to Doctor Fate, she does not bring anything particularly important to the protection of the magisphere, rather helps to solve problems that have already happened, while Fate is the only one who tries to come up with and implement preventive measures.

Totem_The_Other:curious, do you mean Dr Fate instead of Dr Faith? and what about Constantine, and his friend, the rhyming demon that merged with a knight? Merlin, the one who did the merge to save the knight? I'm sure there are others, but those are the ones at the top of my head. sure it's not like Marvel's order of mystics, but there are people who dabble in magic, but the biggest difference is the cost of power for the mystics that differenciate the 2 world... marvel connect the sorcerer to the realm of power, while dc makes a pact with the devil, and that's why there's so little mages in DC, I'm rambling, but yes, you correct
Totem_The_Other
Totem_The_OtherLv5Totem_The_Other

yeah, I agree with you that Zatanna feels way too weak... compared to Fate, Etrigan and at times, Constantine... but I disagree that Constantine causes more problem and /or he doesn't help guard the world from mystical attacks... I believe he does do that, but he uses underhanded means, and even making others pay the price of his magic, making others hate him, but he does what he has to do, utilizing his knowledge in the mystic arts to solve problems as a form of atonement because of the guilt of his own big mistake that sacrificed a young girl's life...

Xapon
XaponLv1Xapon

Only from what I read, he put the world at risk 4 times, if we take into account injustice, then in general 5. And that's just what I've read, and I'm more into detective comics than mystical in DC

Totem_The_Other:yeah, I agree with you that Zatanna feels way too weak... compared to Fate, Etrigan and at times, Constantine... but I disagree that Constantine causes more problem and /or he doesn't help guard the world from mystical attacks... I believe he does do that, but he uses underhanded means, and even making others pay the price of his magic, making others hate him, but he does what he has to do, utilizing his knowledge in the mystic arts to solve problems as a form of atonement because of the guilt of his own big mistake that sacrificed a young girl's life...
NevoNeko
NevoNekoLv14NevoNeko

Nah your correct, Constantine tends to get his Teammates killed. Not on purpose, but it’s just a running trend.

Xapon:Only from what I read, he put the world at risk 4 times, if we take into account injustice, then in general 5. And that's just what I've read, and I'm more into detective comics than mystical in DC
Higgs
HiggsLv3Higgs

it was jumbled on so many ways. One cool way of combining it would probably be to make a stand-off. Like a counter part fight like Quick silver vs. Flash or Thanos vs Darkseid. or maybe the idea of using factors and not the whole one like using marvel heroes but using the setting in marvel like metropolis. But not the jumbled randomly one, like this novel. It wouldve been better if the author added more spice and uniqueness to the characters then there wouldve probably been a chance to make the novel attractive to others.