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Dessy_Lusyanna_C_YLv111yr
2023-05-13 04:29

I love the premise dan the summary of the story. truthfully I read alot of novel about rebirth & transmigration for revenge. but to be honest, about this novel, I not quite fond with the writing style. occasinally I find the choice of words in writing is a little excessive. its just my humble opinion. I really hope, the author can be even better in the future and accept this as constructive criticism.

My Sister-In-Law Is My Mate!?!

I_am_Creator
4.4
334 Chs

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i will try to improve in future. thank you

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