story must be posted , it's simple isekai novel there with op main character sun. must be hard for him to lost his new parants that way and also when he find her new mom. he very happy . i think it was a ecchi wn.

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you know we just posting to make it ranked. So there is no need for you to read those reviews. it just one of the extras. the story is pretty simple with lots of grammar mistakes.

Before I am new in WN, and my Favorite genre was isekai. I read few new WN and I like that. New concept. Keep it up. ]I said, you did a good job in writing, you need to fix some grammar, otherwise it's a good story, especially your main character, in your tag you were not put action tag, so I can't say that your story is less of fighting. well, keep it up

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character is another 10 the characters are all so fun and funny in their own ways and dont blend together too much, you got the girl who keeps getting rejected by guys and gets drunk all the time, goofy ghost woman who doesnt speak, the neighbor who (slight spoilers for chp 34 ig) literally says at one point "ill be your girlfriend" when he thinks that the mangaka has an imaginary girlfriend, and a few others that each have really funny moments. enjoyment is a full 10 100% its so enjoyable literally every minute i spent reading this was amazing its so funny so enjoyable and i honestly cant wait for more because its actually the best

This could easily be just another 'ordinary person in a fantasy world' series with in overpowered protagonist but thankfully it manages to be better than that. It doesn't try to dodge genre stereotypes; instead it revels in them. The characters are likeable and it is fun watching Touya learning about this new world, gaining new skills and defeating various threats. Towards the end of the series the fan service increases somewhat with the near obligatory beach episode. The animation and character designs are pretty good with the sort of look one would expect from the genre. The series ends in a way that hints at more to come; if there is eventually a second season I'd definitely watch it. Overall I wouldn't say this is a must see but would definitely recommend it to fans of the genre

you did a good job in writing, you need to fix some grammar, otherwise, it's a good story, especially for your main character, in your tag you do not put an action tag, so I can't say that your story is less of fighting. well, keep it up. just you know lots of isekai wn release so if you want to stand out you need to make more intresting.

[img=coins]I said, you did a good job in writing, you need to fix some grammar, otherwise it's a good story, especially your main character, in your tag you were not put action tag, so I can't say that your story is less of fighting. well, keep it up.