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2023-08-12 13:09

This novel is... Alright. The story has a good start ig, MC was kinda interesting and the Vampyr thing was a cool add-on. It started not making sense when people didn't question the SI about him seeing through his blindfold, like no one thinks that it's weird they just take note of it and move on. Then the author decided to make some dragon house or whatever tf, which I don't really like, and the whole fic just became very nonsensical to me. The only thing that kept me reading was the cursed techniques but I just can't anymore, I stopped at about chap. 23. The grammar is better than most I gotta give you props, even if there are some minor mistakes here and there. The concept was cool but the story dev. is just not it for me.

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