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AutomatedLady
AutomatedLadyLv133yr
2022-02-23 14:45

The characters are cute and the story's premise is interesting - but I found it a bit slow and the writing a bit confusing. I assume this is just a very, very slow burn book - but there are entire chapters where there are only 1 or 2 sentences actually spoken between characters and all the rest is them talking to themselves in their own heads. That said, I'm still interested to see how this story develops - and the male protagonist seems especially sweet and I want to see if he gets what he doesn't even know he wants.

Her Devilish Alpha

marichat_nettenoir
4.8
251 Chs

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Thank you so much for your review! Yes, this book is slow burn since I believe it's more satisfying that way, I promise the book gets better as the story progresses. Hope you continue supporting this book ❤️ (And the problem where character speaks one or two lines gets fixed in later chapters since I did go ham on some descriptions ahaha)

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I swear you are truly amazing! In love with every bit of the words you use on your novel. Highly appreciated !!🥳🥳 The novel is too good, best of luck for your new venture.❤️❤️❤️

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The story is still quite short but I can definitely say it’s going to be great! Xavier seems interesting and very “beastly” but I can’t wait for him to show his human traits when he will eventually open up 😍 good job author

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