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2023-11-06 13:02

This was an awesome read! Estoy muy agradecido! It flowed with the quality of the original and was paced really well. Loved how the personalities of the characters, especially Fang Yuan, remained superb and on point.

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I want to first say that your a great author. The problem that I have the story is that I don’t think you understand some of the characters. Especially spectral soul. Let’ first talk about about the world and venerables in general the world is very ruthless in this story and people don’ shy away from taking advantage of others when they are down this is what drew us to the story. The world isn’t you normal world it’ more realistic.Secondly I don’t this you understand the venrables becuase first of all they are not normal people if all the genus of history were stars in the sky they would be giant suns. So you shouldn’t put normal logic on the Venerables. Ok so we have to talk about spectral soul which is arguably one of the strongest fercest and smartest venerabl in history. So tell me why would someone who is said to be a psychopath even care or flinch if he comes back as women. Why would he ally with heaven and not try to take control of heaven be his first priority? And also there’ no why some like spectral soul would lose to fang yuan on soul path. I get that fang yuan is a genius but you need to know that even giant sun said that he might over take him in a couple thousand years and it hasn’ even been that long and fang yuan over takes spectral soul one of the most genius in soul path no way. When fang yuan realises that spectral soul revived he will not use soul path anymore becaus she knows that he will not overtake a venerable in the path they are a venerable in. The only reason he still uses luck path is because he needs it to increase his luck and so that giant sun doesn’ t have too much of an advantage. Ok let’ talk about fang yuan becuase he is the most important part of RI everyone including me was drawn to this story because Of fang yuan he is not the smartes or the strongest or the luckiest character he doesn’t have a status nor any allies but he still persists that’s I view Fang yuan he is not your average mc who is op or lucky or somehow smarter then everyone else. He is arguably always in the world position possible but he still persists to chase after eternity and I don’t recall him even saying what he is gonna do after I don’ think it matters to him or us. we just want to see him over come monstrous ods with sheer will power, shamelessness and cruality. Sorry if this review is too long I don’ expect anyone to read it. I really am passionate about this story as it changed my life and I am thank full to the author for picking this up.

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