Review Detail of Bob_Uchiha_XD in In HOTD with The Satou System
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It started well ... Chapter 01- 08👍 good story, but MC seems to have stupid hero complex. Chapter 09 - 29 😔👎 MC became very OP, MC can throw cars as if they don't weigh a ton. MC amuses himself by murdering innocent people (chapter 28, MC victims foraging for food, protecting children and women), mercilessly or regardless of whether it is female. Then MC converse with the family of his victims (the father, mother and sister), MC say that he murdered his children and the father says: ok (summary)... [Is this how a father reacts when he learns that his son was murdered?worst of all, MC tells the family of his victims to join his group and they say: ok what? Seriously? MC is now a psycho OP, pervert who only thinks with his c*ck... not is problem but your stupid hero complex DO NOT combine.
In HOTD with The Satou System
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you shoud read yourself before deciding, this Author knows his stuff, hes slowly introducing other worlds as well, so its getting really interesting to watch their survival. Its good, not perfect, bu great notheless.
FanfictionLover:Thanks for the review. It saved me time.
Touji_san:you shoud read yourself before deciding, this Author knows his stuff, hes slowly introducing other worlds as well, so its getting really interesting to watch their survival. Its good, not perfect, bu great notheless.image
Look, you have to understand that this Mc isnt a saint, he has to make decisions as a Leader and think about his people, so if he sees someone, or a group of survivors, attacking him or his group just because they want the itens for themselves, and violentely at that, he will pay in the same coin, because if doesnt, his group would suffer, sure if he could have, i dont know, yell at the enemies: "We are not here to fight! We can come to a agreement and share the resourses!", maybe it would create some doubt in the opose group, but seeing as the Author said they(opposite group) were looking agressivily to reduce the competetivity, so i doubt that. But the Mc, at the same time, took the responsability to take care of their children, old, and rest, and he is someone who forbades his people to steal the resourses from a group of elderly and children. He insnt perfect and all forgiven, and sometimes he has to take drastic decisions as a Leader. All things considered, read the part yourself and take your own conclusions, i wont say i am right, or that he(the reviewer) is wrong, hust that are points to consider when looking from a "Apocalyptical World survivor" perspective. So, all i say is, give the novel a chance and see for yourself if the novel is worth reading, i am certain you wont regreat it, for this is better than most HSOTD fanfic you will find :)
FanfictionLover:Can you exlplain about him killing innocents tho?
Touji_san:Look, you have to understand that this Mc isnt a saint, he has to make decisions as a Leader and think about his people, so if he sees someone, or a group of survivors, attacking him or his group just because they want the itens for themselves, and violentely at that, he will pay in the same coin, because if doesnt, his group would suffer, sure if he could have, i dont know, yell at the enemies: "We are not here to fight! We can come to a agreement and share the resourses!", maybe it would create some doubt in the opose group, but seeing as the Author said they(opposite group) were looking agressivily to reduce the competetivity, so i doubt that. But the Mc, at the same time, took the responsability to take care of their children, old, and rest, and he is someone who forbades his people to steal the resourses from a group of elderly and children. He insnt perfect and all forgiven, and sometimes he has to take drastic decisions as a Leader. All things considered, read the part yourself and take your own conclusions, i wont say i am right, or that he(the reviewer) is wrong, hust that are points to consider when looking from a "Apocalyptical World survivor" perspective. So, all i say is, give the novel a chance and see for yourself if the novel is worth reading, i am certain you wont regreat it, for this is better than most HSOTD fanfic you will find :)image
The mc is just a hypocrite then? ?? In the 4th chapter where they stole from a store, the mc scolded and even stabbed someone from his group because he is stealing from anothers group, saying they are innocent and they should not steal from the innocent.
Touji_san:Look, you have to understand that this Mc isnt a saint, he has to make decisions as a Leader and think about his people, so if he sees someone, or a group of survivors, attacking him or his group just because they want the itens for themselves, and violentely at that, he will pay in the same coin, because if doesnt, his group would suffer, sure if he could have, i dont know, yell at the enemies: "We are not here to fight! We can come to a agreement and share the resourses!", maybe it would create some doubt in the opose group, but seeing as the Author said they(opposite group) were looking agressivily to reduce the competetivity, so i doubt that. But the Mc, at the same time, took the responsability to take care of their children, old, and rest, and he is someone who forbades his people to steal the resourses from a group of elderly and children. He insnt perfect and all forgiven, and sometimes he has to take drastic decisions as a Leader. All things considered, read the part yourself and take your own conclusions, i wont say i am right, or that he(the reviewer) is wrong, hust that are points to consider when looking from a "Apocalyptical World survivor" perspective. So, all i say is, give the novel a chance and see for yourself if the novel is worth reading, i am certain you wont regreat it, for this is better than most HSOTD fanfic you will find :)image
But, my friend, thats exactly what i have said, he has rules of not stealing and oppressing the innocent, like you said he punished the guy who did that. Like i said, he is powerful, but not all might, still, he tries to ensure the safety of his group and, at the same time, hes juste and kind to other innocent/civilians groups when its possible. I hope i cleared your doubt, but i am sorry if i didnt, English isnt my first language too, so there is that Hahahaha
I_LOVE_MEGUMIN:The mc is just a hypocrite then? ?? In the 4th chapter where they stole from a store, the mc scolded and even stabbed someone from his group because he is stealing from anothers group, saying they are innocent and they should not steal from the innocent.
I won't say this review is fake but you have to see the plot from MC's point of view. It wasn't like he killed innocents. Yes, how the family reacted was stupid but from a Leader's point of view he had to protect his own group so he killed them. But there could have been a better way to deal with their family. I won't reveal much but seeing their family's background, I kind of understand why they accepted it just like that but the execution of the whole part could have better. And once again, the ones he killed were not innocents and they were the ones who attacked first...
Dude, they were the ones who went after him in the first place! He's good with children, a great listener, strong, charismatic, smart, courageous and thoughtful, so of course he would attract their atention, especially in a apocalipse, where no one gives two s**ts about you. I really don't understand your point, he even said multiple times that he won't go picking woman left and right, only those willing to start a real, lasting, relationship with him, even proving this to the point of reacting badly when someone(girl or not) try to take advantage of his position or use him in any way. And lastly, there're a couple of guys with a harem in his group as well, like Kouta and Kenichi, and Victor(Mc), since the crossover happened, is always trying to push people to start a relationship with habitants from the other worlds, to better co-exist and prevent conflicts in the future. So, to me, your opinion is very misplaced, and is giving readers a bad ideia of the Mc's true personality, so please, if you won't give a depth on your comment, remove it from this section, please. The Author doesn't deserve this kinds of comments anymore, he works hard to do this for free, but ends up not getting the deserved merits for it.
cheeki_breeki:agree he goes after most things that move including peoples moms who are in his group
She was an elderl! 🤔 And the mc has forbidden his group to steal from children elderly and I think woman? And they weren't listening to him at beginning anybody would do that I think as I don't like being ordered around😏. Men and teenagers I don't know I didn't read about this until now! Will if he crossed any line that he draw him self that's for sure would be hypocrisy 🤔
I_LOVE_MEGUMIN:The mc is just a hypocrite then? ?? In the 4th chapter where they stole from a store, the mc scolded and even stabbed someone from his group because he is stealing from anothers group, saying they are innocent and they should not steal from the innocent.
Lucifer_Starfall:She was an elderl! 🤔 And the mc has forbidden his group to steal from children elderly and I think woman? And they weren't listening to him at beginning anybody would do that I think as I don't like being ordered around😏. Men and teenagers I don't know I didn't read about this until now! Will if he crossed any line that he draw him self that's for sure would be hypocrisy 🤔
Touji_san:Dude, they were the ones who went after him in the first place! He's good with children, a great listener, strong, charismatic, smart, courageous and thoughtful, so of course he would attract their atention, especially in a apocalipse, where no one gives two s**ts about you. I really don't understand your point, he even said multiple times that he won't go picking woman left and right, only those willing to start a real, lasting, relationship with him, even proving this to the point of reacting badly when someone(girl or not) try to take advantage of his position or use him in any way. And lastly, there're a couple of guys with a harem in his group as well, like Kouta and Kenichi, and Victor(Mc), since the crossover happened, is always trying to push people to start a relationship with habitants from the other worlds, to better co-exist and prevent conflicts in the future. So, to me, your opinion is very misplaced, and is giving readers a bad ideia of the Mc's true personality, so please, if you won't give a depth on your comment, remove it from this section, please. The Author doesn't deserve this kinds of comments anymore, he works hard to do this for free, but ends up not getting the deserved merits for it.image
