the first chapter is good then it became a bashing fic i had high hopes because of the first chapter too bad this become a cringe bashing dic , the amount of edginess can cut our universe in half
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You should give it another try, it's very good. You have his mistakes, but he makes up for it with a very entertaining world.
It's really good tbh, Just ignore the cringe then there you go- a very good fic. It's worth it to read.
I don't understand what "edginess" is this that you're talking about, can you give a examples, or a more detailed explanation? I read it, and i dind't find such things, Victor(MC) isn't the kind to flex his powers nor his abilities. He cares for his lovers, protect his group, helps in every single departament in need, and is always working for the better of his people. So i really don't get your review, it does't make much sense to me.
You literally just copy pasted this comment to other comments. R u being paid or something.
PUERKO_Senpai:You should give it another try, it's very good. You have his mistakes, but he makes up for it with a very entertaining world.
