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Daoist0rQpy1
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2021-11-04 03:06

The story has a good plot and the characters have a good back story and explanation respectively which is why it gives the story a lovely texture to it... Really enjoyed reading it!!! Good job to the author!!! Keep up the good work hehe...

LUNA'S CHARM

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Min_loony
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This is awesome I like how everything is detailed I don't think my words are needed to say how good this is This is really a very beautiful work

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LucienGrey
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Amazing book, I see the creativity and work you put into it, can’t wait to read more!! I love fantasy so this is very enjoyable! Totally recommend it for anyone who likes fantasy! The writing is clear and actually not confusing, it’s a very beautiful and amazing story!!

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This is the perfect book for a person who loves fantasy. Everything is written so clearly and attractively that no confusion occurs while reading. I love it. ❀

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NARU_TAE
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The story is amazing! Everything is detailed and clear. I love fantasy books, and this is one of my favorites. It is vey well written. I appreciate your hard work. Thank you for writing this story!

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Fathimath_Faiherr
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Awesome!!

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GREAT

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DaoistNwwWQO
DaoistNwwWQOLv1

I don't have words... I mean, using brilliant, super, amazing, out of this world and so on would be underestimating... Ppl who read this book is super lucky πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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Guardian_Angel_7
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It's a great Story so far with a nice start to the plot. I like the idea and topic of the Story, you write so good, very interesting and exciting! I love the characters, well some of themπŸ™‚πŸ˜‚, thanks for writing, keep going! It could develop to an amazing Story.

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Kisa_Shimizu
Kisa_ShimizuLv1

It's is good, of how you develop your characters and the story to an exciting one. Though I think you could before hand mention about how a particular scene is almost mature and so. So far, keep up the good work [img=coins]

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